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Fiction Friday – The Unmaking Of Miles Black

This is the last of the #FictionFriday series. When I first started writing, I used Fiction Friday as an apprenticeship to learn the craft. This year it was a chance to experiment a little, and to keep my focus on stories I am working on. Other weeks are brief explorations of an idea using an object or idea as a metaphor to examine an aspect of life. I intend to turn it into a brief book in the near future.

I will not be continuing this experiment on in 2026 while I focus on a couple of current WIPs that warrant my attention.

Thus, the final Fiction Friday for 2025.

I kept the receipts from every transaction of my one wild and precious life thus far. Filed them under three categories: Things to Learn From, An Attempt Was Made, and Curiosity Is Never A Wasted Opportunity. I can point to certain parts of me that I made. Some of them are cack-handed, immature attempts at building something grand. But I am still proud of them. Others are fully refined, articulated, monuments of something I worked hard at. Some things I put on a shelf as a reminder. Others are boxed away and kept in storage. My life looked like George Costanza’s wallet, metaphorically speaking.

I also have a fourth category: A Cup of Tea and Vegemite Toast (aka Shit That Happened To Me That I Had No Control Over). The neglect, the abuse, the forgottenness. Some of them still fester and weep pus and blood and shit no matter how much I take care of it. I keep changing the bandage. I don’t like what made me but I have to accept it. Sometimes no amount of tender care or repair changed the fact that shit happened beyond my control.

Receipts make for great kindling to start a conflagration. Today is as good a day as any other to start anew.

Fiction Friday – Neighbours

This is the penultimate Fiction Friday for the year. Last one is next Friday, Boxing Day, then I will lay this experiment to rest. 

It started with a plastic bag full of oranges hung over the back fence. A new family had moved in, young couple with small kids. I thanked the wife when I saw her one afternoon as she pulled up after the school pick up run. I was introduced to their faces when the trampoline was built and they bounced up and down all afternoon. Then it was a bag of lemons in season. In return I made jars of marmalade. They became the neighbours you say hello to as you water the front garden or nod at when you’re mowing the lawn. It was handmade Christmas cards from the kids one year that I put on the dining room table. My wife loved the kids’ cards and made Mars Bar slice to take over. As the kids grew older, the trampoline was used less but bags of fruit were still hung over the back fence. When my wife died they all came to the front door to offer their condolences and brought with them homemade meals for the freezer. They moved away a little after that, new job opportunities for them both but at the last goodbye, he brought me another bag of oranges and I gave him the last couple of jars of marmalade.

Fiction Friday – Cereal Boxes

Cereal Boxes

There was a time, he remembered, when breakfast cereal boxes contained a surprise, a gift, a treat. Something a child searched for and cherished, showing it off to friends at school as a signifier of status. He once collected the entire set of cricket cards found in the Weet-Bix box, trading his doubles at school with his best friend. Last week he bought a box of Corn Flakes as an act of nostalgia and sprinkled a handful of sultanas on top and remembered his Scout Leader called them ‘blowflies’ while on a Jamboree, and the name stuck with him ever since. This morning he poured out Corn Flakes and heard the scrape of autumn leaves raked up, the clatter of pegs dropping into the peg basket, and the rattle of dry bones. He wondered if they would ever put a trinket back into cereal boxes and surmised, that for him, it would be loss summarised on a bumper sticker.

Fiction Friday – treading water

FICTION FRIDAY

treading water
the kettle will boil as it is designed to do and i will make my tea the same way i have always made it: strong, letting it draw for a while, milk and two sugars. getting dressed for work and putting on my shoes left sock, right sock, left shoe, right shoe. then, this evening i will push the peas around my plate, pick them up with a forkful of mashed potato and a piece of cut sausage, dipped in tomato sauce. my routines are as habitual as liturgy. as is the pain i experience. you know pain. i know it constantly, intimately, permanently. and this i know, if i stop treading water, i’ll drown.

Fiction Friday – Bellbirds

Bellbirds

I keep the window down when I drive along the main road past the state forest and listen for the bellbirds. They are the sound of rain in the treetops on a clear day. I don’t know what they look like. I could look it up but I prefer the mystery. I imagine a bellbird is no larger than an egg cup. It’s head is the colour of polished silver melding into the breast plumage of copper beginning to oxidise, with wings of grey storm clouds spread out over the ocean, and a long tail of silken black. Something so small yet it’s voice rings clear and true. To me they are the sound of rain in the treetops on a clear day. At my funeral, the recessional be the song of the bellbirds and I will know their mystery.

Fiction Friday – drought

FICTION FRIDAY – drought

It has slipped into your pockets and the grit caught under your fingernails causes you to notice the lawn is looking a bit brown and even though you start to give it attention and turn the sprinkler on with increasing frequency, the ground’s thirst is not slaked and the wind scrapes off the topsoil. Then you start to think of the last time it rained, properly rained, the type that soaks in gently and then it turns to a drenching getting from the car to the front door and turns the streets into the consistent static of tyres, and you can’t remember. And because the memory is some months back, you notice the dryness of your mouth and the cracks in the skin around your heels and the leaves that fall crack underfoot, lifeless, discarded in abandonment. On the fridge door is a child’s artwork with cotton balls stuck on as pretend clouds, and there is as much chance of rain from cotton balls as there is of love from the person whose breath condenses with yours as you sleep, falls to the pillows and dries out before dawn.

Fiction Friday – Nothingness

Nothingness
Two empty mugs sit on the kitchen table. One has the teabag still inside drawing up the dregs to the string and into the cardboard label. The other has a teaspoon beside it. A knife rests on a side plate, smeared with Vegemite and margarine. Toast crumbs are scattered as half-finished sentences. The budgie chews on the plastic frame that once held a mirror. A novel lies face down on the table, open at where the story was left off to be resumed later. The house is empty. She is outside watering the garden, insouciant as he is while hanging out the bedsheets on the clothesline. A mourning dove calls from the tv antenna on the neighbour’s roof.

Fiction Friday – Sparrows

FICTION FRIDAY

Sparrows
When taking the clothes off the line, I leave the pegs on as weightless sparrows affixed to a point, and I imagine them to be notes awkwardly arranged on the stave. A random chord arrangement. Major, minor, augmented, diminished. Dad hates it when I leave them out and prefers to take the pegs in when he does the washing. He leaves a blank stave with no notes. These are the shapes of our voices. When he’s not looking, I sneak out to leave one or two pegs on the line.

Fiction Friday – The Shape of Your Heart

When you ask me to give you love, in what shape do I present it to you? Or what object is the better representation that I may give it to you, my brother? I try and think of the presents I’ve given you over the years, at birthdays, at Christmas, but I remember more the donuts and cans of soft drinks we bought at servos, the hot chips from the takeaway joint down the street, and in doing so I have a better understanding of you and how we related to each other. I argued for the profundity of literature and language; you argued for the profundity of the saw and the hammer. We built our worlds within these frameworks and admired each other’s handiwork without truly understanding it and entertained one another with suggestions of how to manage the interior design. Your birthday is coming up next month and I want to buy you something but the dead cannot accept the gift. Maybe I’ll go for a kebab and keep the torn pieces of foil and add them to the sculpture of your soul.

Fiction Friday – The Book of Lamentations

The Book of Lamentations

At Christmas time, when all the relatives have gathered, seated as garlands of gossip around the dining room table, I will sit at the children’s table instead. I will listen to the prophets utter newfound wisdom and I will not be the one to poison kids with their own fears.